Draft Three of the Front Cover

This draft was my third attempt of creating a professional looking music magazine, which would appeal to the target audience and to the genre of the magazine. However some of the conventions were slightly wrong such as the barcode being on the left when it's convention for it to be on the right; also the image of the male model and the colour scheme made the magazine look poor and dull according to one piece of feedback which I was given. 

Feedback - "I like the magazine and the model, but the colours of the font and the whole front cover doesn't fit well with the genre it looks too dull and unkindly. The male model looks out of place on the magazine and shouldn't be put there, the magazine doesn't look like what you'd find on the shop shelves."